Zif of Porphyra

Zif of Porphyra

This installment of Purple Duck Games’ “…of Porphyra”-series clocks in at 41 pages, 1 page front cover, 1 page editorial,2  pages of SRD, leaving us with a massive 37 pages of content, though it should be noted that these are formatted for A5 (about 6” by 9”) paper and as such, you can fit about 4 of them on one sheet of A4 or letterpack paper, so let’s take a look!

 

The Zif-race was originally introduced by Alluria Publishing in their Remarkable Races-series, but in this book, we do get a significant expansion of the material as well as modifications that make the material herein work differently…so what are the Zif?

 

In short, they’re playable slug-people that gain +2 Int and Wis, -2 Str (making them a bit lopsided). Zif are Small aberrations with a speed of 20 ft. Zif have no feet and as such, don’t have a slot there, but they receive a second belt slot to make up for that. As a standard action, a zif may retreat in its shell, gaining DR 5/-, but while in it, the Zif may explicitly not make any other action. Upon maturing, Zif are assigned a caste in Porphyra, which translates to a constant SP: One may choose detect magic, detect poison, detect secret doors or detect undead. The sucker foot of the Zif nets them a +4 racial bonus to Climb, -4 to Acrobatics made to jump and +4 to CMD to resist trip and bull rush. Finally, a zif is born with Knowledge – they gain one such skill and an additional skill rank each level, which must be applied to said skill. As a whole, a potent race and I’m not the biggest fan of the constant SPs, but craftsmanship-wise, I have nothing to complain.

 

Now, let’s look at the alternate racial traits included in this pdf: Here, we have racial proficiency with all bows and zif weapons, replacing the inborn knowledge. The zif know the flail-snails as the Flavalum and some of them replace their protective shell with elements of their brethren – such zif have a 30% chance that a targeted spell aimed at them fails and a 10% chance that a spell is sent back to the sender. However, they also suffer a 30% spell failure chance for both arcane and divine magic, which stacks with armor penalties, if any. Instead of the shell-caste’s inherent magic, some zif gain +2 to AC versus humans and to grapple checks made against humans. Zif not born to their society gain +1 to Bluff, Sense Motive and Knowledge (local) instead of their inborn knowledge. Some zif get +2 to concentration to cast arcane spells defensively and a bonus language – however, the racial trait this replaces is not included in the write-up. Instead of the caste-SP, some zif have a 1/day psychic leech and caste-less zif with better skills (+2 to Appraise and Perception) can also be played. Also interesting: Some zif may move through natural difficult terrain at their normal speed while within 30 ft. of water, though magic difficult terrain affects them normally – this also replaces the inborn knowledge.

 

The pdf also provides a selection of race traits, which include gaining a kazif armor made from your parents, gaining Perception as a class skill due to modified antennae, better ranged attacks versus foes far away (as a nitpick – should be a trait bonus) and some weird ones as well: Like 1/day regaining a use of a school or domain power upon making a save versus a spell or SP. Control over a class skill (losing an old one for a new one) and we have a nice idea, a trait that reduces one flanker’s attack bonus to +1. As has become the expected norm for Purple Duck Games’ racial supplements, we receive a surprising array of favored class options – we not only get core classes + gunslinger and magus, we also cover the occult classes and a whole bunch of classes from Purple Duck Games’ oeuvre – from the illuminati to the infinyte and the brujo. Kudos for going the extra mile!

 

Now, while the zif’s writing clearly depicts them as somewhat quirky and yes, funny even, they also have the potential to be really, really creepy, as their racial deity…well. Is Yig. And yes, the great old one is depicted as a deity in the appendix, including two religion traits – though one does not specify the bonus type. Yig, as understood by the zif, is the epitome of bravery and cunning in battle and the zif believe that the ghosts of Great Old Ones he consumed will return one day in an apocalypse called Void-War – the warpriests that call themselves Disciples of Yig thus study from the get-go to be ready – this archetype is locked into the War and Void domains, but instead of the War blessings, a disciple if Yig may use the Tactics  domain ability instead, drawing from the pool of uses of blessings. Very potent: When you and your allies roll initiative, an ally within 30 feet may roll twice and take the better result.  Instead of focus weapon, these folks get a pre-emption pool that contains class level + Wisdom modifier points – these may be spent as a free action to increase initiative modifier before rolling, which can all but guarantee being first in at least one combat – it would have been more elegant and less prone to nova-ing and 5-minute adventure days if that ability had a scaling cap per roll that improved with the levels.

 

Instead of the 3rd level bonus feats, these guys learn the battle-shell burble-narble: they may chant a hymn to grant all allies within 30 ft. +1 to atk and saves against fear, which may be increased by 1 by foregoing the bonus feats gained at 6th level and every 3rd level thereafter. This bonus is maintained until the warpriest fails a save or takes any action other than move. Oddly, this is a SP and the bonus granted is untyped.

 

The shellrune wizard, member of the darble-caste, has a caveat to prevent summoner multiclass abuse – they gain Handle Animal and Fly as class skills. Instead of Scribe Scroll, they use their shell as a spell book and learn 3 spells upon a level-up, which eliminates the biggest Achilles Heel of the class. They also are locked into a vermin familiar, but at +1 level. Instead of 5th level’s bonus feat, they may 1/day cast a spell on their book-shell sans expending a spell-slot, though it must be from the divination, enchantment or conjuration schools. I assume that learning spells and inscribing them on the shell still takes gold etc. – or is the archetype limited to the spells gained by level-ups? That would explain the power of some options here, but it should be spelled out more clearly.

 

The shellsinger bard is only proficient with simple weapons: Competent trademaster replaces inspire courage and nets an ally within 30 feet +2 to a skill check while the performance persists, increasing that bonus every 4 levels beyond 1st by +1, modifying inspire competence.  As a nitpick, the ability-text reference’s “zif’s performance” instead of “competent tradesmaster.” These guys also gain class level as a bonus to Appraise and Sense Motive and replace countersong with an array of analysis-themed spells. 7th level yields Leadership. At 8th level, breaking free of fascination takes a -4 penalty to the save and requires a save even in the presence of obvious threats, replacing dirge of doom. 20th level and 20th level yields a magnificent mansion instead of deadly performance.

 

Stoneshell fighters gain proficiency with zif guu-slings and zifbats and, cool, classify these properly in weapon groups. They may also take Goo-Crafter and Master of Guu as though they were combat feats. Goo-Crafter lets you secrete guu, zif construction-mucus, and assemble it into the shape of mundane weapons and a limited array of weapons. Issues here: The feat lacks a note to prevent the creation of specific keys. Additionally, you cannot secrete “more than 1/2 your Constitution in guu per day” – so, how much guu does a given creation take? Is that based on weight? No idea. Master of Guu thankfully specifies that further- yes, it’s pounds and this feat nets you quicker guu-secretion and the option to make masterwork items via guu…and unlocks more. Still, the original feat should have specified that…it’s bad when you have to look at a follow-up feat to get how the base feat is supposed to work.

 

Anyway, back to the archetype: At 3rd level, these guys replace armor training and bravery with shell-fu and, while flavorful, the ability is a mess from a rules-language perspective. It mentions identifying via a crimson headband – so does the archetype lose the headband slot? Also, I kid you not, that’s directly taken from rules-language: “Shell-fu has five circles of skill, achieved like so: 3rd level DR 1/- vs. ranged attacks, one attack per turn; 7th level DR 1/adamantine vs. 1 melee attack per turn;…” So, do we get to choose? Is this passive or predicated upon activation? Does it stack with the zif’s shell? Beyond inconsistency even in the wording of the ability, it is basically non-operational.

 

The pdf also features racial feats: Clone Army modifies the Leadership’s cohort: Instead of gaining one, 2 levels below your own, you get 2 (!!), but at 3 levels below your own. OUCH. Both must have the same class and ability scores, sure…but ouch. Dreams of the Old Ones is a really, really strong feat for divine casters – you get free scavenging from the wizard spell list. Sure, it has to be 1 level below your highest spell level and failure to make a DC 20 Will-save nets you Wis-damage upon casting and fails casting the spell, but considering the potency of the wizard spell list, that still is strong. Bonuses to atk and skills when dealing with concisely defined eldritch creatures can be found, but Mobile Shell would be more interesting, allowing you to enter the shell as a move action and allowing you to make 5-fot-steps while in the shell. Another feat increases the potency of spells dealing hit point and ability damage and moving the drained points to another target – while the rules-language makes me twitch, it’s functional. Partial Withdrawal into the shell can be found and an antennae-based teamwork feat allows for telepathic communication – how to determine the maximum range of the communication, though, is a total mess: 10 feet per character level sounds easy enough, but e.g. 4 2nd level zif could communicate within 80 feet – so, what’s the limit? At what range are zif included in the calculation? No idea.

 

The equipment section contains stats for guu-bolts, aforementioned shell-armors made from deceased zif, poolaboodts (the main sea-vessels of the zif) and aforementioned weapons. Beyond these, we get new magic items – e.g. a cursed rod of wonder that may cause insanity. Goolabalum can be used to alter probability of d% and d20 rolls, but not attacks, saves or skill/ability checks, as an immediate action. Cool! Rod of guu helps with Guu Crafting and may fire guu at short range – the damage it inflicts is not properly codified and a hit imposes a -2 penalty to Dex. At +2, parasitic weapons (only available for melee weapons, thankfully) steal 2 points from a random ability score of the target and confer them to the wielder, lasting 1d8 minutes. While kittenable, it’s not a good strategy, so this gets a pass. Prismatic shell-polish is a potent defensive item and generally works, but the rules-language, while understandable, makes me twitch: “Thus, if a being under the effect of prismatic shell polish is hit with a sword, the attacker must make a DC 20 Reflex save to take 1/2 damage (1-4) or have no effect (5-7).” This is further exacerbated by the item having a d6-column with 8 entries that affects the attacker. If the user is affected by a magical attack, he instead gains a similarly random buff for a short duration. I *can* use this item as presented, but its rules are depicted in the most convoluted way I could imagine. Which is jarring, when one compares that to the precision that e.g. new spells like create goo – which even prevents burying foes under them. Similarly, while parasitic ray is potent and steals ability scores, it…kinda works rather well. I can see myself using this. Moving rapidly along porphyrite borders. At 3rd level, a limited, but potent maze-like variant is a bit under-leveled for my tastes and there even is a spell to summon deep ones.

 

Now, I already mentioned the zif caste system – and the pdf goes on to classify the extensive array of classes covered in the FCOs in the caste-system – which is an amazing “one step beyond” piece of flavor, as far as I’m concerned. The sample character we get would Gungablug, hermaphroditic zif warpriest (disciple of yig) 6 and the pdf also sports a full stat-block and brief primer on Barbledrum, the Curved City of the Shell.

 

Conclusion:

Editing and formatting on a formal level are very good – I noticed no serious accumulation of typos. The rules-language, on the other hand, is ODD – you see, it oscillates between being meticulous and precise and being…well, bad. You’ve seen some quoted material in the review. It’s often functional, but it does make my brain hurt a bit. Layout adheres to Purple Duck games’ 1-column b/w-standard with purple highlights and is pretty printer-friendly. It should be noted that the pdf offers neat full-color artworks. The pdf comes fully bookmarked with extensive bookmarks.

 

Perry Fehr is an amazing *author* – he has the elusive artistry-component of design, the aspect you can’t learn, down to a T. At the same time, his craftsmanship is not always up to the level of his vision. The zif, as presented here, are evocative, playful and fun and could be played for laughs just as well as you could make them really, really creepy.

 

I really, really like the zif as depicted herein, in spite of the hiccups that are present. At the same time, I think that both shell and guu, both utterly amazing concepts, could have been emphasized further in the design-choices made. It is also baffling to me, how one book can range from utmost precision to wonky, convoluted and imprecise wordings in some cases. Conceptually, this is at least a 4 or 5 star-file; if, however, you expect precision in the rules-components, you’ll be infuriated by some, though by far not all, components herein.

 

I am honestly torn here – I do believe that a good rules-developer and a bit of additional polish could have made this full-blown amazing, but if I go by what is here, I can’t rate this as highly as I’d very much want to. While it hurts my soul, as I like the pdf very much, I can’t go higher than 3.5 stars, rounded down, on this one. If you’re looking for flavor and can shrug off the rules-hiccups, then get this – I am positive that you’ll enjoy what you find herein!

 

You can get this flavorful racial supplement here on OBS!

 

You can directly support Purple Duck Games here on patreon!

 

Endzeitgeist out.

 

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